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FIC: Saturation (Ronon Dex/John Sheppard)

A little more EnzymePorn!

Cuz aelora is bored! (Okay, the timing is coincidental, but still!)

Set mid-Lost Boys. Sequel to Distillation. The entire series can now be found here, thanks to aukestrel. Thanks go to crysothemis and destina for their beta skills.

Saturation

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*runs around room*

Okay, boredom officially fixed!! :P You're timing is way superb!!

And this:

"You'd have gone apeshit stark naked, swinging your dick around like a club," Sheppard says against his shoulder.

*ROLLS*
::drools over your icon::

Okay, boredom officially fixed!! :P You're timing is way superb!!

Happy to help, chica!
I think what I like best about these newest stories, is we're seeing Ronon expose a bit of himself to Sheppard. He isn't being he caretaker this time, it's he who needs John, which gives their relationship some balance and dimension. Though he's still the warrior/protector/subordinate in a lot of ways, we're also seeing them become a team, in and of themselves, and apart from the rest of Sheppard's team.


Oh, and it's hawt.

Thanks!
He isn't being he caretaker this time, it's he who needs John, which gives their relationship some balance and dimension.

Oh, cool! I'm not sure I'd thought that all the way through, but yeah, it's nice to have Sheppard be 100% and doing his leader thing, even if that means bottoming sometimes. ;)
"You'd have gone apeshit stark naked, swinging your dick around like a club,"

This gave me a smirk the size of Kansas, or thereabouts. So so true.

Scorching hot, but still going beyond simple porn. Mmm.
This gave me a smirk the size of Kansas, or thereabouts.

Hee! It's an image all right. ::goes to happynakedRononplace::
Enzyme porn yay!

I'm feeling anticipatory (is this a word?) here. Because once they do give Ronon enough, things'll go bang.

Though I do wonder. How will the writers of the show get themselves out of this one? They've basically got three drug addicts right here.
They've basically got three drug addicts right here.

Not only that, but they've got three drug addicts locked up without access to their next fix. I have a feeling that whatever happens, it won't be pretty.
I love the underlying theme in this series about Ronon's desire, nay need, for control - not just to control what's happening around him and to him, but to control the maelstrom that is his own nature. It gives him a level of awareness and intelligence that I like and can believe.

Of course, I'm all HAWT that Ronon has so quickly recognized John's strengths as being exactly what he needs to help him gain that self-control. At the same time, they're finding something special between them together. Wheeeeeeee!

And *pant* ;D
Ronon has so quickly recognized John's strengths as being exactly what he needs to help him gain that self-control. At the same time, they're finding something special between them together. Wheeeeeeee!

Hee! I'm glad you like them so much, P! That makes my day.
::incoherent with adoration::
Awwwwwwww! Thank you! :)
Gawd, they're so incredibly hot together. The push and pull between them -- rawr! I can smell the testosterone from here. LOVE this series. Thank you.
I can smell the testosterone from here.

::sniffing::

Now that you mention it... :)

Glad you liked it!

(and ::rmph:: on your icon...wow)
Dammit! I haven't seen 2.10 "Lost Boys" yet! Argh!

Despite which, these last two fics have made me happy, with the happy fucking and all, plus, whoa, angst!

http://www.geocities.com/coffeeslash/bone/atlantis/01/index.html

They're up. I also inserted all the dates of composition, and I made a feedback link so people can Reply To your LJ and leave FB that way.

This pairing has really caught your fancy! Muse away, baby, because I like these boys together.

I personally delete fics off LJ after about a week and make a link from my LJ header to my Web site. I do this because of some weirdness with NC-17 material and Internet-indexing bots that grab info off blogs.
Dammit! I haven't seen 2.10 "Lost Boys" yet! Argh!

You're in for a treat. There are a couple of classic scenes -- McKay/Sheppard and Ronon/Teyla come to mind -- but there are also plenty of places to write into, spaces to be filled with multi-pairing porn. :)

This pairing has really caught your fancy!

It really has. They have eaten my brain. They're just so darn good for each other.

They're up. I also inserted all the dates of composition, and I made a feedback link so people can Reply To your LJ and leave FB that way.

Thank you SO much. I know you're getting ready to go out of town and have been workingworkginworkingworkingworkingworkingworkingworking hard, so I am especially appreciative of your time!

I personally delete fics off LJ after about a week and make a link from my LJ header to my Web site. I do this because of some weirdness with NC-17 material and Internet-indexing bots that grab info off blogs.

Okay, I did that for all but the latest one, and I'll do that after a bit. I cut the text and replaced it with a link to the story at Coffeeslash -- is that right? I have no way of knowing whether anything's been bot'ted from my journal, but probably better safe than sorry, no?
Raaawwwwrrrrrrrr.....

Hawt!

Coherent comments later but I'm so glad that Ronon is inspiring you.
Coherent comments later but I'm so glad that Ronon is inspiring you.

Thank you, nancy! I like the big lug a lot. :)
This was wonderful, as always. I love the fact that even though Ronon really wants to fuck John he understands that he doesn't have enough control simply because he wants it too much. A difficult conundrum for most people in that situation and yet Ronon isn't so out of control that he doesn't put Sheppard before himself. I also liked how afterwards he moves to his customary place between Sheppard and the door. It's another sign of just how protective he is.
Thanks, bluster! I'm glad you liked it. :)
This is just amazingly good. I ship Shep with everyone but before Ronon/Shep and YOUR stories, I was more a McShep girl. I still love them..but if I had to pick a OTP...it would be Ronon/Shep. BECAUSE of YOUR stories. Yep. Well..that and the DYNAMIC of HOTNESS I see on my TV Screen. LOL
but if I had to pick a OTP...it would be Ronon/Shep.

WOO HOO! A convert!

::does a happy dance::

Well..that and the DYNAMIC of HOTNESS I see on my TV Screen

You and me both. Very hot.
In my brain, Enzyme!sex is lot like post-quickening!sex - hard, and hot, and almost out of control. And wow, did you deliver on that. Ronon is so incredibly sexy here, riding that fine-edged high between want, need, and immolation. He is so good with Shep, and Shep is so good with him too; they just fit, and Ronon doesn't trust it because he can't. I really have a thing for personal trust issues, so this made me very happy.

Plus I have to mention this one line:

Ronon relaxes, breathes deep until his muscles relax, until he can wind the sting back into pleasure, linking Sheppard's weight with the pressure on his thighs, the hard heat of Sheppard's cock with the throbbing ache in Ronon's back, creating a connection that makes every sensation good.

That was a complete and total yum for me. *woof*
Enzyme!sex is lot like post-quickening!sex - hard, and hot, and almost out of control.

YES! And it takes a strong man (Duncan, Ronon, Methos) to not let it take over completely.

Honestly, I could read stories about that all day long.
Okay..I'm getting real tired of LJ eating my replies. ::Sigh::

So..short version of post. Amazingly Hot. Amazingly good.
It came through! It did!
On third (or is it fifth?) read, I have to say that the part I love most is . . . all of it. I adore the way you manage to sneak the emotion in without it going all sappy. Like this bit:

It's all too easy to imagine a time when his only release will come from his own hand in the cold and the dark, when he'll once again have to be entirely self-sufficient.

But tonight is not that night.

Tonight, he has Sheppard.


You really, really, make me feel for Ronon, big hunk of enzyme-laced testosterone that he is. He's all that, and yet still vulnerable, which twists my litle heart in all the best sorts of knots.

And then, you know, there's the scorching hot sex. ::g::
big hunk of enzyme-laced testosterone

HEE! I love that description of him!

Unlike some people who end up living on their own for an extended period, I have the feeling Ronon craves company, that he's not a solitary creature at heart. He may be lacking some social graces after all that time, but the way he is with Teyla and John (canonically, even Rodney) gives me the impression that he's really happy to be among people again.
wow I love this series so much. :) each part is hot and I love seeing the story from Ronon's pov. :) thanks so much for sharing.
I love seeing the story from Ronon's pov

That's because John won't talk to me. ;)

(Anonymous)

Brilliant as usual :).

I loved how Ronon refused to go to John out of concern for what he'd do, but in the end, he had to go to him, and John knew just what Ronon needed. I liked how you got across John's concern and anger over Ronon's bruises without him really saying or doing very much. And the sex was HOT!

I liked Ronon's offer to take out Ford, and John's reaction. At first I imagined that John was so quick to disabuse Ronon of the idea out of concern and loyalty to Ford, but then this: "He's got ten times the men. You take him out, they'll kill you." made me wonder whether John wasn't more concerned over Ronon now, that he wasn't simply jumping to the defence of his friend as he would have done before if Ronon had suggested such a thing.

I love how Ronon always puts himself between John and the door. And his thoughts about protecting his team were very good.

Oh and, I did, of course, enjoy the idea of naked fighting too *g*.

Laura.

Re: Brilliant as usual :).

Thanks, Laura!

FWIW, I think Sheppard is concerned about both Ford and Ronon. He's a worrier, that one. ;)
Yunno, you've single handedly made me a ShepDex shipper, and I haven't even watched 2nd season yet (sometimes I hate being Australian. Is SGA a valid reason to emigrate to Canada?).

I liked the imagery of Ford's men, alone in the dark jerking off, & Ronon having been there, & appreciating that he's got something way better.

And yep, fighting naked would make a lot of people vulnerable, but I truly believe Ronon would be just as deadly & intimidating, possibly more so on the last one. Actually, I'd be too dead from HAWT to fight back if he were naked, I think.
Yunno, you've single handedly made me a ShepDex shipper, and I haven't even watched 2nd season yet (sometimes I hate being Australian. Is SGA a valid reason to emigrate to Canada?).

Bummer about not seeing the second season yet, but YAY! for being a Sheppard/Dex shipper! We need MORE of those!

Glad you liked it! :)
Jesus. You're trying to kill me.

guh. so hot.
You're trying to kill me.

I'm really not! ;) I'll take that as a compliment. :)
This was really, really good. Aside from the hot, they so clearly care about and for each other, it makes knots in my throat. The thing with the guys alone outside was very effective.
The thing with the guys alone outside was very effective.

Cool! Glad it worked for you. :)
As always, Bone, a really good story. The image of Ronon naked, swinging his dick like a club is particularly vivid. (grin)

But I really do like the way you do this pairing. Very, very nice.

WP
But I really do like the way you do this pairing.

Thanks, WP! I'm enjoying them WAY too much. :)
I love this series :) You write just so hawt, & not only the s*x parts, your character interactions is so hawt. I can truly feel the caring Ronon & Shep have for each other. To me that is a sign of a great writer.

"You'd have gone apeshit stark naked, swinging your dick around like a club.

That part needed a spew warning LOL
That part needed a spew warning LOL

It's an image, all right! ;)
Oh holy crap, YES.

*is speechless with amazement*

That's a gorgeous*= icon!

Oh holy crap, YES.

HEE! Thank you! :)

Saturation

These just keep getting hotter and hotter. I wish we could see this on screen.

"If he dies, you die."

When the withdrawal kicks in... and Ford's men have been taking it longer.

Re: Saturation

When the withdrawal kicks in... and Ford's men have been taking it longer.

I know! I know!

::is anxious::
By nightfall, Ronon's ready to drill Sheppard through the wall.

Thank you for that image. :)

It's all too easy to imagine a time when his only release will come from his own hand in the cold and the dark, when he'll once again have to be entirely self-sufficient.

But tonight is not that night.

Tonight, he has Sheppard.


Love this.

Ronon strips his remaining clothes and moves into the light. His shadow meets Sheppard's on the wall behind him, the two shapes merging when Sheppard approaches him.

Lovely. I like Sheppard examining Ronon's bruises and his anger.

"Don't be careful. I can't. Just... believe me. I need--"

Great contrast to Sheppard's gentleness. Guh.

He takes his accustomed spot between Sheppard and the door.

Ronon's loyalty is great. Wonderful that the emotions between the two are so sharp.
Thank you for the cut-n-paste feedback! It's always lovely to hear what works in particular! I like Ronon's loyalty, too. Once he gives his trust, it's done (unless you're an idiot, like Kell, and betray that trust).
*shivers*
*shivers*

Hee. I take it that's good? :)
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